You need to keep it simple and to the point. People won't read through a long paragraph for details. Shoot, people have a hard time getting through a 280 character Tweet or a 5 minute YouTube video these days before stopping halfway through.
Here is a better example. USE YOUR OWN PHOTOS if you have them. If you don't have any of your own, perhaps use those from the resorts website.
This took me at most 45 minutes to write this up from details you already provided.
For Sale!
Royal Dunes Resort
8 Wimbledon Court, Hilton Head Island, SC 29928
http://royaldunes.com
Exchange Company: RCI, Gold Crown Rating! | Three Bedroom/Three Bathroom
Two Master Bedrooms!
Buyers First Use: 2021 |
About the Villa
Resort offers spacious, elegant three bedroom/three bath villas in the oceanfront community of Port Royal. The villa will comfortably accommodate up to eight guests. Large flat screen television in the living room and each bedroom. resort offer complimentary internet access in the unit and public areas. | View attachment 27184 |
Villa Configuration
- Master Bedroom 1: King Bed
- Master Bedroom 2: King Bed
- Bedroom 3: Two Twin Beds
- Pull Out sofa in the living room
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Season
- Floating Bronze (2021 Weeks 1-8 and 49-50)
Annual Fees
- 2020 Maintenance Fee was $895 (Includes $87 Real estate Tax, $285 Reserve Fee, and $523 Operating Fee)
GOLF GOLF & MORE GOLF!
- Additional Sports Package allows guests access to golf for up to four people each day
- That is up to 28 rounds of golf for only $100!
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About the Resort
Beautiful outdoor spaces features two accessible pools, hot tub, sauna, playground, shuffleboard, picnic & grilling areas. | View attachment 27188 |
Closing costs will be the responsibility of the buyer. Buyer can select their own closing company. Closing can cost between $200 and $400 depending on the company choses. My suggestion is to use LT Transfers for an affordable closing and transfer! | View attachment 27190 |